Reflection on Project 2

In this blog post, I will be answering the Student's Guide questions in order to reflect on my revision process.

1. Word choice was revised the most.

2. My thesis didn't change very much from one draft to another, but the overall organization of my essay did. I added a new paragraph and considered breaking one paragraphs into two.

3. Flow mostly contributed to the changes, but audience and readability was definitely considered.

4. I think the changes lend to my credibility, because I attempted to make my work as understandable as possible. I was truly writing for my readers.

5. One of the changes I made was to address the audience more explicitly. I think this will allow for greater audience comprehension.

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6. I revised a lot for sentence structure, because I tend to either write very long, wordy sentence or very short ones.

7. The audience will be able to understand my writing better because it will be more concise.

8. I reconsidered the convention of not addressing the audience explicitly. I also reconsidered not using italics and avoiding the second person, although I ultimately didn't use second person in my essay.

9. Reflection is a way for me to address myself when I'm writing, which I rarely do outside of personal journaling. It allows me to address my own creativity, which I am working on building.